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The sunshine bathed my face just like other days, just like many other occasions, but this time... it was different.

I struggled to bring myself back to reality, that very reality I wanted to escape from, it was so strange to wake up not being myself, to watch my body as if it was a mere illusion, seeing the world through a silhouette that, awkwardly, was my own.

I sighed.

I was so tired of living and at the same time not doing it at all, I was sick of wishing I could feel  and not being able to do it, I was tired of everything, but still I managed to get myself back up with a force that wasn't mine, with an enthusiasm not belonging to me.

Certainly I was afraid that he would see me like this, discouraged and depressed.

He was lying by my side, just as every morning, a warrior trapped in the body of a child, with courage as admirable as the fiery aura of a never-extinguishing sun.

When you moved in your sleep, I became nervous and tried to get away, as light as the breeze blowing through the sky, and from there I watched you again. It's funny how I'm always unconsciously searching for you, how I find you in every gaze, how in every dream my soul sees you, and that's because today you mean everything to me. Only you can see me, only you can find me.

Silently as a whisper I came back to your side and became closer, much more than I ever dared to. I could see your chest moving slowly while breathing, but despite being so close I could not feel the warmth of your breath.

I was so close and so far from you at the same time.

I am but a specter, a simply reflection of my soul, but this isn't my entire self. With this form I can but follow you, with this appearance I can but watch you.

But still I was not happy, so I recklessly came closer, my face almost touched yours, and your lips were such a tempting invitation for someone who unconsciously longed for you far beyond a mere admiration.

I felt as if though my entire self trembled, that strange and forgotten sensation I didn't have since I ceased to perceive the world around me, but now by your side I felt alive again, I felt I was myself again.

"Don't do it, it's not right", that was all I whispered, still being prey to my unconsciousness.

And despite the denying weight of reason, I did it ... I kissed you even though I couldn't do it, yet I could feel you in my dreams.

Although our lips never touched each other, and my hands never touched your skin, I could still imagine that this was true; I could feel my lips touched yours and my fingers caressed your warm skin.

Embarrassed and surprised at my own boldness I floated away, watching over your dreams, and I could hear you between whispers. You were calling my name gently and tenderly. Could it be, you were dreaming about me?  That made me so happy, even if it wasn't true I was happy to know that at least my memories are with you.

I admire and love you for being who you are, for carrying my destiny and my martyrdom on your shoulders, because you are in danger for being the chosen one. I want to help you, I want to free you from this sacrifice, I want to fight alongside you and that is why I'm here with you ... my dear engineer, Link.

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Antes que nada debo reconocer que mi traducción era... UNA BASURA XD!, así tal cual se lee XDD!, le tuve que pedr ayuda a mucha gente para terminar esto :S y en realidad se los agradezco de corazón, aunque no se XD si no se etiende lago, ya saben la gramática no es lo nuestro XDDD!

Muchas gracias a :iconlagenerala:, :icondialirvi:, :iconfoxmccloude:y mi novio XD! que se dieron la lata de leer mi traducción mulita y ayudarme a corregirla XD!

Versión español: [link]
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Zelliana Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
Felicidades por la traducción!
Es como abrirse a un mundo de lectores nuevos, :)
Asi más conocerán lo genial que escribes :D
Me acordé de estos fics "hermanos" porque recién compré el ST y lo estoy adorando cada vez más *O*
Una duda... ¿Cómo hiciste para poner el dibujo y abajo el fic??
Sale la opción al subirlo?
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
*w* estas jugando ST?? es genial *w* me encanta XD
:P Bueno cuando subes un texto te da la opción el mismo DA
:P te pide que subas el archivo y si subes un texto luego
te permite subir una imagen ^^ que queda sobre el texto :P
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Zelliana Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013   Traditional Artist
Oh genial, si al momento creí que sería una pregunta "rara" porque nunca he intentado subir un texto XD debí hacer eso primero, pero gracias por responder :D
Debería probar eso de los fics en inglés, lo intenté en el FF, pero me eché para atrás.
;-; lo sé, es un juego genial, al fin pude conseguirlo *w*
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
:P Bueno uno nunca sale de la duda si no pregunta XP, lamento haber tardado tanto en responder :S estaba de vacaciones XP y sin internet :S bueno si tenía internet en el celu pero no se porque desde ahí no puedo abrir los mensajes del DA :S es extraño :S

^w^ Espero que puedas subir tus fics ;) si escribes en ingles aún mejor ^^ así mucha más gente los leerá XP, yo... no soy muy buena con el ingles :S así que para este tuve que pedir mucha ayuda cuando quise hacer la traducción XP
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Zelliana Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013   Traditional Artist
Sí pero tendré que estudiarle al escribir diálogos, porque no es igual en inglés. Creo que leeré más fics en inglés hehe
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
:P eso es una gran idea ^^
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zeldagirl236 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sooo cute!! me encanta tu estilo! escribes muuyy bien! quiero que escribas mas!! por favor!!
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zilia-k Featured By Owner May 27, 2012
Hi! Thanks you very much :)
I have more stories, but all are in Spanish XD!, if I get someone to help me translate;) I'll upload more ^^
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zeldagirl236 Featured By Owner May 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yea its better if you translat..i speak spanish but i kinda struggle reading in spanish...lol good job though...
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Miss-Kiri Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww that's really adorable n.n
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
Thanks :D
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Miss-Kiri Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome c:
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Shadow7Zerudahime Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmegustaplz:
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FoxBluereaver Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012  Student Artist
Una que otra faltita menor por ahí, pero la verdad la traducción está muy bien hecha. Si gustas, te puedo ayudar a editar lo que haga falta.
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012
Si me puedes ayudar :) te lo agradecería mucho ^^
que tipo de errores viste :S?
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FoxBluereaver Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Artist
Más que nada en algunas palabritas, por ejemplo "spectrum" por decir "espectro" (la correcta en este caso sería "specter"). Ya que no es muy largo creo que para mañana te lo puedo tener listo.
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
XD! yo no entiendo nada jajajaja XD
si hubieras visto mi traducción te da infarto XP
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FoxBluereaver Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Artist
Je, pues de hecho ya me aventé y la tengo lista. Ahora mismo te la envío al correo.
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Ah gracias ;) te pasaste ^^
a penas llegue a mi casa lo resubiré XD con las nuevas correcciones :S imagínate XD 4 correcciones y tu aún le encontraste cosas raras XD!
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FoxBluereaver Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Student Artist
No fue nada :hug:
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Listo ;) ahí volví a resulbirlo :P Muchas gracias por tu ayuda ^^
estoy viendo si traduzco el hermanito de este, pero antes XD tengo que pensar que hacer de dibujo :S
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IhEaRdYoUlIeKmUDkIp Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Baaaaww it's so cute! thanks for translating!
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
XD not thank me: P here vcabezas were la generala, Dialirvi and my boyfriend, my English is very bad
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ViridianRain Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
Very touching. I really really enjoyed the short story <3
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Thanks you very much
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Dialirvi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
cuando quieras... (?)

no en realidad no <<

Y SOBRE TODO KARINA, LOS COEMNTARIOS EN ESPAÑOL, WOW
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zilia-k Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
jajajja XD es que no, ya fue mucho XDDD que me voy a poner a pensar en poner los comentarios en ingles XD si tu misma me dijiste que era un desastre mi traducción XD jajajajajjaa
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